Write a story
Paragraph 1- Give relevant background information about the main character.
Paragraph 2- Develop the plot. Where and when did the events take place? What happened first?
Paragraph 3- Continue the story. What happened next?
Paragraph 4- Write the end of your story. What happened? How did the character(s) feel at the end?
Andrea Macías Díez 4C
ResponderEliminarA story ;
In the story that I am going to tell right now, there are four characters (three girls and me). There esa a girl who was schizophrenic,the other girls and i did know ... Let's go!
We were in my apartament on the beach,the girl with that disorder was called Ana and the order two Sofía and Marta.Ana slept with me interesa the sofa as there were more kids and more people on the floor ..WhatsApp happened first was that he got up at night and said that they were knocking on the door and started yelling
I got up the first one and the others got up, we went for her who was behind the door very upset without knowing what she was doing, we calmed her down a bit and when we realized that I had not taken it for many days.
We felt a little neevous because we really did not know what was happening ,we talked to her and she started to take her treatment. The truth is that we felt very anxious without knowing what was happening ,but at the end ,as we realized because he lacked the treatment ,we were calmed.
Lucía Sánchez Silva 4ºC
ResponderEliminarBlog Task: A story.
Secret House.
Carlos and Lucas are best friends. They are sixteen years old and they are very adventurous. Their biggest dream is to go to an abandoned house in the countryside outside their home. Their mothers throw them an anger every time they talked about going to that house. As soon as they could go to the house to find out what’s hiding.
A day, while their mothers were together, they took advantage to go to the house. At first, they was scared. The house was covered by trees. Then they saw a sign that say `This house doesn’t belong to you, GO!´
After that, they entered the house without any fear. They saw a house very clean and tidy, it was strange. When Lucas looked right, he looked an enveloped.
Afterwards, they read it, it was tracks that they should follow. They started to touring the whole house and they had to go through some difficulties. The house had areas and rooms very hidden. When they were coming to the end, they were too tired. Next, they came to the last track. There was a last room and when they opened the door there was his friend Laura who had disappeared two years ago.
Finally, the girl told that she had been preparing those difficult tracks for two years, because she knew that the adventurers were always them. The tracks were in such difficult places because her kidnappers couldn’t see it. Her parents would always thank Lucas and Carlos for finding his daughter.
MARÍA MARÍN DELGADO 4ºC
ResponderEliminarMy grandfather is a very interesting and wise man.He could not study because he has to work with his mother and he experienced many stories. The other day,when we were going to Seville ,he told me one of those stories.
One day,he was helping his mother in the shop.His friend Antonio arrived and told him that he had found a kind of treasure. My grandfather left the store alone and he had ran away with Antonio.
Afterwards, when they arrived at the field there the treasure was, the treasure was missing.
They went back to my grandfather´s store.My grandfather was very worried because he had left the store alone and his mother was going to fight him.
When they arrived ,everything was very closed.My grandfather opened the shop and he found his whole family had prepared a surprise party because it was his birthday.
To my grandfather,what he liked most was that his brother from Madrid was there.
MARI CRUZ ROMAN IBAÑEZ 4C
ResponderEliminarSTORY;
-In this story that happened 3 years ago, my father, my mother, my aunt, my sister and I appear
-We were in Ronda, a town in Malaga, we went to visit him for a day. When we went to enter the bullring I went to ask my sister who was in a park to let her know that we were going to enter the bullring
-When I arrived at the park I was not there, it scared me a lot because she was small and we had never been there. I ran to tell my family and they were very scared. We started to ask the people who were there in the park and they told us that if They had seen her but she had left with a family, we were much more afraid because we thought that they had taken her
-We searched the streets and could not find her, when we went to enter the bullring she was there, she had entered with another family. When we found her we were very happy because nobody had taken her
María Pallares Delgado 4C
ResponderEliminarThis story goes about my mother when she went to draw blood.
My mother was a normal day like any other to draw blood but she did not know that she was going to be one of the most important in her life because when they drew her blood they discovered that she was compatible with a 3 year old girl who needed a kidney.
The doctors told my mother she did not want at first because she was afraid of the operation but in the end she gave the kid kidney.
Everything went very well the girl could live quietly and without disease and my mother very happy to be able to help her.
Ariadna Mejías González 4°C
ResponderEliminarYoung murderer.
Dylan, a 12-year-old Frenchman. Blond, thin and tall, with beautiful blue eyes. When he was younger he had problems in France and moved to Seville, Spain, where he currently lives.
When Dylan was 7 years old and still living in France, his parents decided to have another child. Nine months later, Nathalie was born. At first Dylan was very happy with his new little sister. He fed Nathalie, took her out for a walk, taugh her how to walk... However Dylan began to get jealous of his sister because her parents paid more attention to her than he did, as a baby needs a lot more care.
Dylan's jealousy continued and they were getting older. He could not stand his sister anymore. Dylan decided he had to do something. One day, their parents left them alone for a while at home because they wanted to go shopping at the nearest supermarket. Then,when the parents came back...it was too late. Dylan killed his sister!!
His parents didn't know what to do or what was owed. What would happen after that?
When Dylan realized what he had done, he began to feel bad ... A mixt of feelings settled in his stomach. Sadness,satisfaction,anguer,guilt. Dylan was confused and thought that the best thing he could do was kill his parents so they wouldn't go to the police and he could get out of this crime with impunity,when suddenly... Dylan woke up in tears and sweat from that hard time. It had all been a nightmare!
Lucía Rivera Morales 4ºC
ResponderEliminarThe young suspect
Susana is a 15 year old girl from Cordoba. She has long hair and beautiful green eyes. She was a good student but one day she failed an exam and from that moment she decided not to continue studying.
One day, she was walking down the street and a woman stole in a store. The thief ran out and the owner of the store asked her if she had seen the thief and she told him that the thief had run away and gone to another street.
The owner of the store thought that she had been the one who had stolen from his store, but he did not say anything because he knew where he lived. She went very quiet to her house and told her parents what had happened.
The owner called the police to go to her house. The police went and told her that she had to accompany them to see the security cameras. When they arrived at the store, the cameras had been turned off all morning. Susana was very nervous, the policies had told her that she was the main suspect, but the shop next door had recorded the door of the store all morning and in the cameras it was clear that she had not been the thief and they let her go to her house, the owner of the store gave her many things from his store because he was wrong.
Gonzalo Martín Vega 4°C
ResponderEliminarMy sister is a very kind, smart and affectionate person from time to time, she is beautiful and she dresses well, last month we went to Poland and on the plane we were bored and she told me a story that happened to her.
the story unfolds on Matalascañas beach, my sister and her boyfriend went to the beach in the morning, they were there all day and in the afternoon when they were going to leave, they spotted a blue-tailed shark.
When they saw the shark they called the Benemérita and they evicted the beach to put the citizens safe, later the military troops arrived from the Spanish navy and they started looking for it.
In the end they found the blue-tailed shark and towed it to the bottom of the sea, my sister felt very scared and now she is afraid to bathe on the beach because of this moment.
BLOGS TASK A STORY
ResponderEliminarManuel Madrid Lindes
The story that I'm going to write to you happened in May 2016 on a Sunday morning that my uncles, my cousins, my parents my sister and I went to the green corridor of Sanlucar el mayor.
We went in a horse-drawn carriage by two mules, we rejoined my relatives in olive groves and we continued by albaida until we reached a very steep slope down where we almost killed ourselves because the brake at the beginning of the slope the brake failed
when we got there we got into a place with a lot of shade and my cousins my sister and I went to investigate until we found the river and I do not know what happened to my cousin and me that we wanted to cross the river and We did, we ended up soaked and my mother and my aunt gave us a fight.
When I dried up and went where my family members were again and I stayed there when we finished, we picked up and left again for villanueva, a very marked day for me.
Javier García Ortega 4ºC
ResponderEliminarBlog Task: A story
The next story is about an extraordinary animal that is known by a lot of people and it’s very popular in his secundary school. This animal is called Asuncion and she is a goat.
The story takes place in the field, specifically in Doñana. Asuncion went to that place with her classmates because it was a trip. She walked very happy between the trees, even she saw her cousins there.
Everything was going well, when it was the moment to across a river.
Her classmates crossed with ease. But, when Asuncion tried, she fell to the water and the corrient dragged her. So, she fainted and when woke up, she was alone in a mud puddle. She was very afraid and started to cry. Suddenly she heared shoutings. They were her friend that they were calling her.
Asuncion went to the place where she heared the voices. After running a lot, she found her friends and everyone hugged. She was nervous yet, but finally could return to her home.
María Cristina Gelo López 4°C
ResponderEliminarBlog task: A story
My best friend and I are very adventurous, we love the mystery although sometimes there are things that scare us.
This happened in summer. We heard about a famous "house of terror", all those who went said it was silly, that in that house there was nothing strange. So we, we wanted to check it. Next, we took a flashlight to capture the curious things that interested us and we went to the abandoned house. It was night and there was no one, or so we thought... but let's continue with the story.
When we entered deeper into the supposed kitchen, there was a large window and it was open. We went up the stairs, but when we were reaching the top, it sounded strange, my best friend said it would be the wind and that's why the window was closed. In the part of the house above, we saw some shadows, there we started to scare, and quickly heard once said: "outside our territory". We ran down and realized that we were missing our camera, which was in the kitchen! We went in for her, and we realized that it was not the wind that sounded, it was a man dressed in black giving a blow. He told us: "Leave this house if you do not want to suffer". We were terrified and left the house running.
To finally, the next day in the morning, we returned with many more friends, and there was no one or strange things happening. I think that this only happens at night when nobody goes, but I never went to that house again. I had a really bad time.
Maria Garcia Reyes 4ºC
ResponderEliminarBlog Task: A Story
A bit hard road
My grandfather was a kind,sympathetic,polite,hardworking,friendly person,who wanted what was best for his children.
He wasn't a bitter,rude man,he was the best man in the world to me.He loved 'El Rocio' and he also liked animals,horses,dogs,cats,mules...
His favourite animal was oxen,so he had ten of them in his field.People loved him and that's why they told him to be the cartwright of Olivares's brotherhood.
A day,in Aznalcazar,at Quemas's river.two years ago,in 2017,the whole brotherhood was on their way to 'El Rocio' and to get there we had to go through this river.
Everything was going very well,lots of smiles,lots of fun and mostly lots of emotions.
After a while,while we were going across the river,we heard a loud noise,we locked back and we saw that the wheel of the tumbril had been broken.
Then,after that mishap,we saw that the mules of a charret had rampaged and everyone started screaming,being very afraid and they started running.
Seeing that people were running to try to get out of the river,I started looking for my grandfather but I couldn't find him.Then I went down to the river to continue looking for him and I saw that he had fallen down,so I went running to help him to get up.
When I picked him up,I realised that he was injured,he had blood on his hand and on his head too,so I went to get some sanitary help so they could heal the wound.
Finally,after this little bit tragic moment for me,we arrived to the place where we were going to spend the night,and my grandfather told us that he didn't feel very well,he started to get dizzy,to pucke and his preassure went down.
At that moment,I started to cry,because I thought my grandfather was going to die.
The following day,he said that he felt a bit better,I relaxed,and afterwards,we continued along the way that would take us to 'El Rocio'.
Helena Caballos Castro 4C
ResponderEliminarMy story.
My cousin Aina and I are the main characters of this story.I was thirteen and my cousin was fourteen. My cousin is a very outgoing, clever and loving person. She wants to be a nurse and she studies a lot. For me she is a sister.
Two years ago I was in Barcelona visiting my family. It was winter. My family suggested visiting the Natural Park called Montsey so the day before we went to the park in the morning. We were very warm and we carried backpacks. When afternoon came my cousin and I were tired and our family want to go down to the river so they went to the river while my cousin and I were waiting for them in a picnic area. It was not long. It was around ten minuts only. The picnic area was higher than the river, from where we were we could see the river below so we were looking at it while we saw something strange. We first think that It was a rock... but It isn’t... What was that?
Luckily we had a binoculars in the backpage then we use It and... we can’t believe It... It was a very little deer lying on the ground. It was injured and It had blood. maybe it would have hurt with the branches of the trees or the rocks. We were so distressed... we didn’t know what to do! My cousin told me that we must wait for our family and then we will tell them. We were waiting them. Waiting was very long, even if it was only ten minutes. Later... at last they arrived the picnic area!
We showed It to them and they were amazed. My uncle told us that we must help It so my uncle, Aina and I went down the river and my uncle tried to call the emergency number but the phone coverage was very bad... Right! We were in the forest! It cost a bit but we could finally call. They told us to wrap it in some cloth and take it to a calmer place. My uncle wrapped It he in a towel and we carried It to the picnic area. Vets arrived and they told us that the deer was a baby and they told us that It’s strange that the deer babies were separated from their mother. ‘He must have fallen or scratched’ said a vet. ‘It is not very serious but the wounds are very deep’ added another vet. They also told us that we musn’t be worried because If they leave him in the same place the mother will find him. Vets picked him up to cure him. It took a few days to heal and be able to run again.
Sadly, my family and I already had to turn back to Seville because of my father's work. Days later the baby deer recovered. I would liked to have been there to see him. The vets called my cousin's family to come and watch the deer liberation. My aunt filmed it in a video and she sent me via WhatsApp and I saw it. I was so proud of my family and of myself! I felt so good!
A few weeks after returning from the hospital when I had the strength to move, my friends and I planned a pool party in the house above my field, to get together and enjoy a good day.
ResponderEliminarExactly it was the day August 20 about 4 in the afternoon we went there, my father took me and four others in the car, and we were followed by two other cars, some friends of mine who had come more than once They went without problem but a few friends of villanueva had no idea and on top of them I explained that it was by the road of Olivares - Sanlucar and I sent them photos of where they had to enter.
While those of Villanueva were looking for the location of the field, the others enjoyed themselves and my happiness was so great that I had enough strength to go and look for the people of Sanlucar on the road, until I found them on the road that was not, I told them which It was the road and we ran back, not only for them to enjoy the day but because I did not trust leaving my friends alone.
When they arrived at 11 in the afternoon we said goodbye and left, that day was like a dream.
ResponderEliminarElena Sánchez Camarena
When Mario eventually looked up he couldn't believe who he saw standing in front of him. She didn't seem to have aged very much in that time, although she could see traces of grey in her hair. Even her clothes were the same as he remembered them. It was as though he had just stepped out of a photograph. 'What are you doing here?' asked Mario nervously. 'I was looking for you' she replied with a smile, 'and now 'I' ve found you'.
Mario and Alba had been friends at university and had always talked about opening restaurant together. After graduation they had gone his separate ways and lost touch. And now here they were, standing apposite each other on the street outside their old university.
Once Mario had recovered from her surprise, Alba took him to a restaurant round the corner and explained she had just bought it and would she like to manage it. Of course, Mario accepted with great pleasure
Helena Algarrada Diaz 4*C
ResponderEliminarBlog task:
The strange girl:
Hope is an American girl with a few peculiar traits, perhaps called powers of which you will hear throughout her story. She goes on a trip to Spain where she meets people like Daniel ,that although at first it may not seem it ,they will have things in common.
Hope ventured on a trip to Spain when she was 17 years old. Because they celebrated the tenth birthday of one of his cousins and his uncle paid a trip to her to go and see them. Everything seemed normal until a mysterious guy appeared half of the celebration and began doing strange things. So she tried to talk to him but he didn’t react. Then he asked that how she could see him , but she complained saying that he was a normal person however that was not true. He was Daniel.
They went to a place farther to speak and he explained her that only certain people can see him when he use his superpower. Therefore if she could see him was because she was part of his group.
She began to realize several things that had happened to him throughout her life so she trust in him. But it was a bad idea...
Everything was a lie! It was all a trap that his uncle had organized to catch her, to experiment with the powers that she had.
Hope felt trapped without knowing which or what was happening . But ... would be achieved she to escape? To be continue....
Maria Dolores Franco Fuentes 4º C
ResponderEliminarBlog Task: A story
The Town Mouse and the Country Mouse
Now you must know that a Town Mouse once upon a time went on a visit to his cousin in the country.He was rough and ready,, this cousin, but he loved his town friend and made him heartily welcome.Beans and bacon,cheese and bread, were all he had to offer, but he offered them freely.
The Town Mouse rather turned up his long nose at this country fare , and said: " I cannot understand, Cousin, how you can put up with such poor food as this, but of course you cannot expect anything better in the country; come you with me and I will show you how tolive. When you have been in town a week you will wonder how you could ever have stood a country life ".
No sooner said than done: the two mice set off for the town and arrived at the Town Mouse's residence late at night. "You will want some refreshment after our long journey" said the politeTown Mouse, and took his friend into the grand dining-room.
There they found the remains of a fine feast, and soon the two mice were eating up jellies and cakes and all that was nice.Suddenly they heard gowling and barking.. "What is that?" said the Country Mouse. "It is only the dogs of the house," answered the other. "Only!" said the Country Mouse. "I do not like that music at my dinner."Just at that moment the door flew open in came ,two hugemastiffs, and the two mice had to scamper down and run off. "Good-bye, Cousin," said the Country Mouse, "What! going so soon?" said the other. "Yes," he replied;
"Better beans and bacon in peace than cakes and ale in fear"
ROCÍO DE LA ROSA GUERRERO. 4 ESO C.
ResponderEliminarBlog task: A story.
The story happened 3 years ago, we were my mother, my father my sister and me.
We were on a trip , we went to Murcia. On the way we made several stops, because it could take 6 hours to reach the destination. In one of them, we were in Granada. We had stopped to dine, because it was very late and we had not eaten dinner. It was snowing and I went out to the entrance of the restaurant. I started running and I fell, as the ground was snowy.
When we finished dinner, we continued with the trip. Arriving in Murcia we were lost and we turned off the target. When my father realized we were already almost in Valencia. Because it was very late and there had been an accident on the way, we had to sleep in the car and stay in Valencia. When he woke up we headed to Murcia.
When we arrived at the hotel, we were very tired, but we went to walk around Murcia and to have lunch in a restaurant. When we returned from the trip, we were telling everything that happened to us, it was very funny, for a moment we were worried because we have diverted, and to get to Valencia, but he served us and we have to learn how to use the GPS
Fran López López 4eso C
ResponderEliminarThe story I'm going to tell has 3 protagonists, my mother, my ant and me, and it's the story in my ant and I met and we became better friends because my mother almost killed her
It was a summer day, my family and I went to Matalascañas beach where we have a house, when my mother arrived I wanted to go to the toilet and when she came in I heard her scream and I went to see what happened and it was that the bathroom was full of ants and cockroaches
Then my mother ran to the kitchen and took a spray bottle and threw it all over the bathroom killing all the ants and cockroaches except one, niko, who survived with no wound and with only a white mark that would differentiate her from the others
In the end, niko decided to get on my hand and started to bite me as a form of love and my mother accepted that I will keep it and until today we are together
Laura Rosales Rodríguez. 4°ESO C
ResponderEliminarThe strange story of Tessa:
Tessa woke up screaming again. The same nightmare repeats again. Every night, each time she falls asleep, she returns to live this hell that doesn´t let her live calm. Like every night, Tessa got up shivering, came to me and asked me to stay with her and give her a cup of tea. The next morning, Tessa durst to told me that horrible nightmare that every night disturbed her.
Ten years ago, when she only was 9 years, she went in holidays with her parents to a paradise island. Their fists days were fantastics: they played in the beach with the sea, took photos of fantastics beasts... Also they met new friens, for example, the owner the beach bar. One day, while she was changing her clothes in a public bath, her parents dissapeared. At the door of the public bath appeared a snake´s flake with a note which said: Your life is the only salvation of the people who you most love. Behind the note there was a drop of blood moon-shaped. In that moment, a some tears streamed down her face. She looked at me and continued telling me the story.
She very afraid ran away to ask for help but there wasn’t anyone in the island, she was alone faced with a damn and unknown danger. She began to explore the island until she arrived at the beach bar of his friend, where she and her parents eated every day. On one table there was another flake of a snake with a note, where this person said her the time she had to found him and safe her parents. Tessa remembered that special place, were she enjoyed playing with her parents. She had to go to the beach. When she arrived at the beach, a very rare mas was waiting her. This man was tall and pallid, his eyes were deep red and, in his hands, he had her mothers bracelet. Tessa shouted: WERE ARE MY PARENTS? WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH THEM? WHAT DO YOU WANT OF US?
The man began laughing cynically and said: Your blood is very valuable, you have magic in it, with it I could be the most powerful man in the world. Tessa was so afraid that she began to shout. Her cry created a crystal rain that only felt that man, the man who kidnapped her parents. She felt a deep hatred to this men that this rain killed him. What Tessa didn´t know was that with this man, her parents soul also died. At the end of her history, Tessa, crying and trembling, dropped his head on my chest. I hugged him and made sure that this story would never occur again. I shall never let she pass anything like that and not returned to talk about this issue.
ANDREA VERDIER GONZÁLEZ
ResponderEliminarBlog task;
I wanted to have a quiet and relaxing day, but it turned put by the opposite. It was Saturday morning and I was reading a magazine when the phone rang. It was my best friend Lucy that she needed my help, it was my best friend so I couldn't ignored her. 'Where are you? ' I asked her, she answered that she was in her home, 'Come quickly' she added.
When I arrived, Lucy told me there was a robbery in the next house. A large van had driven to there, besides, the TV, computers and all the electronic gadgets were removed. I said to Lucy that perhaps they are moving into a new house. 'Don' t be silly' she replied to me, 'the boy that lives there is in my class therefore, he would have say he will move to a house soon!!' I realised it could be true.
Rapidly we phoned the police, they arrived very quickly. John, the house owner, thanked us our behaviour in that terrorific scene. By a few days, Lucy and me were famous because we were in the TV with the name of 'Super Heroes'.
Gema Yaqui Román Navarrp 4ºC
ResponderEliminarThis is the story of 3 teenagers, who live in different places in Spain, but had the same illusions.
Candela, the youngest, was 12 years old and from Zaragoza.
Carmen, was 13 years old and was from Ciudad Real.
And I, who is called Gema, was 15 years old and I live in Olivares, Sevilla.
At three we really like music.
For Christmas they gave us some tickets for the concert of Operación Triunfo in Madrid, on February 8, at the Wizink Center. The day arrived and I traveled with my parents to Madrid to go to the concert. We got a Friday, the same day of the concert. We spent all day in Madrid and when the night came we went to the concert. There while we waited for the concert to begin, I met two girls, Candela and Carmen. I started talking with them and their relatives. We talked about our tastes, about Operación Triunfo ... We were super excited and looking forward to the concert. It was 9:30 p.m. and the concert began.
We take the whole concert singing, dancing, jumping and screaming. It was a very beautiful and unique experience for all three. When the concert ended we gave each other's phone number and from that moment we continued talking.
At that moment, a beautiful friendship came out and I refer to what one of the singers said, Miki, "Music unites people from all over the world because music has no limits"
Blog task:Story
ResponderEliminarThe main characters of this history are a group of friends. These friends are Lucy, Karol, George and Marc. This group loves adventures and mysteries.But George is a scared person.
One day when they leaving the institute, they found a lose mobile phone. But they didn't see anyone. Later the mobile phone rang and when they responded a very strange voice talked.
George was scared, but they don't understand anything of the voice said.They tried to understand what the voice said or what was the language that the voice talk. But they didn't succeed anything.
Finally the next day they saw a girl that was looking her mobile near their instituto and they talk with her to return her mobile. She was very thankful. But they never knew what said or what was the strange voice.
José Ramón Pérez de la Carrera, 4º C
ResponderEliminarBlog task: A story.
Once upon a time there was a boy who lived in a field on the outskirts of a town. His home was a small house where also lived his parents and his grandmother. He liked a lot the history of his village and loved collect old objects.
One day he found a trapdoor covered with sand and leaves. The boy ventured and opened the trapdoor and what he found was so surprising that he even fainted for a few seconds. When he woke up he got up quickly and ran.
For two days the boy did not stop having nightmares so he decided to be brave and go back to the hiding place. Once there, he found weapons, corpses and remnants of the Second World War.
He was amazed and ran to call his parents. They told him that what he had found had been buried for generations and nobody had been able to find. For this reason the story was considered a legend that nobody believed. The boy became very famous and is currently the director of the museum where all these objects are exhibited.
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ResponderEliminar_Manuel Cabrera Díaz_
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It was September 27, 2035 and there I was, along with my battalion, which called itself Spartan 1, we were a light support company.
Me, Sergeant Manuel, 32 years old, together with soldiers Daniel and Alejandro and Corporal Alberto.
And there, in the middle of a village in Morocco, we were waiting for reinforcements.
In one of the houses we went to rest and heal our wounds. I saw Alberto get up from the floor with a facial expression in which I could interpret that he had heard something.
-Guys look there, that's where our people come! - Corporal Alberto exclaimed rather cheerfully.
I asked him to pass me the binoculars and when I started to look, I realized that the corporal was totally confused, because they were not our allies ...
-To the floor all! - I shouted to the company when I saw that they mounted a heavy machine gun which pointed towards our position, and all of us threw to the ground.
A hail of bullets fell on our position.
I ordered them not to move anyone except Daniel, who was the sniper. I went with him to the upper floor of the house and ordered him to open fire against the position of the machine gun. He managed to do his job, but there were many enemy troops surrounding us so I had to make the decision that they all shoot (which I did not want since there was little ammunition left)
In the house, at the bottom there were two rooms, Alberto and Alejandro were in one and Daniel was on the top floor, so I opted to go to the other room and open fire from that position.
The minutes passed and that did not end, I was living my worst nightmare come true.
About half an hour later, I stopped listening to the gunshots of my comrades and I thought maybe they had run out of ammunition.
I left where I was to go for my companions and my surprise was not finding anyone of mine inside or outside the house. I was alone
I chose to hide somewhere.
I found a kind of trapdoor on the wall and got in there.
I could see how five Moroccan soldiers entered the house and each time they came closer to my location.
They opened the trapdoor, pointed at my head and ...
- You were not supposed to study history for Tuesday's test?
I saw my mother next to my desk.
I had fallen asleep and it had all been a dream.
Yes, I had lived my worst nightmare, I had witnessed my death for a moment.
Belen carmona beitia
ResponderEliminarthe kidnapping of emma
Emma is a French girl who was a little famous, because her father always dressed as Santa Claus at Christmas and he gave gifts to all poor children. It was known as Petter Claus.
At Christmas Emma traveled with her classmates to Italy, and there, a group of men who hated Christmas and were against the children receiving gifts was well known. Emma, the only thing she wanted on the trip to Italy, was not to meet this group of men because everyone knew that emma was the daughter of petter claus, since it was on TV. The first day Emma and her partners went to a famous square, which was decorated with Christmas decorations. There they saw fire shows, made artificial snow, etc. It all started when a group of men started screaming. WE HATED CHRISTMAS!
Emma was very scared because she already knew what was happening to that group, so she went running without her companions to the hotel where they stayed. On the way , she met them and when she saw them , she tried to flee but it was too late, they took her, and they took her home.her companions when they missed her, they went to the police and they reported that Emma had disappeared. The police told them that they would do everything possible to find it but that it would be a very difficult rescue, because in Christmas in Italy there were many people.
When a few days passed, a friend from Emma Miguel received a message from her, saying: I am kidnapped in the house of the group of men who hate Christmas and they say that if I want to get away from here, my father should come to Italy and pay them to them with all the money that was going to buy the gifts for the children. When his partners heard the news they became very nervous, and the first thing they did was call emma's father and tell him what happened.
His father did not think twice and went to Italy and gave all the money to the kidnappers, he was very sad for not being able to give happiness to poor children, but he preferred to live with his daughter the rest of his life.
Emma was the happiest after being rescued, emma and her father petter claus went to the police and gave part of what happened. The police are still looking for those men.
On October 31, celebrated my birthday with all my friends, I made a party on a ship from Albaida. That day coincided with Halloween, and the party began at eleven-thirty at night.
ResponderEliminarAt 2 o'clock in the morning we ran out of ice for the party, so I told my friend Marta to come to the gas station with me to buy ice, both of us were very scared, because it was too late.
When we already bought the ice, and we were going back to the ship, a clown appeared in the distance, Marta very happy told me not to be scared, but when we were 400 meters from the clown, she started running behind us.
We both ran without stopping to the ship, we arrived and closed the door, so we could not enter, later, we opened to see if the clown was following, but he had already left. We were both very scared and nervous, but we looked at each other and started to laugh when we saw each other. And we were able to continue enjoying the ice party.
Unfortunately, in this story, the main character is me. Apart from me also appear my mother, my friend, and her mother.
ResponderEliminarIt was a few years ago, I was going to start in secondary school. All started when my mum suggested me go to walk with my friend and her mum to bike lane. I told to my I told my friend that if we were wearing roller skates it would be more fun.
At the beginning of the bike lane, there was a slope that at first doen’t seem very inclined. My mother was giving me her hand and I coudn’t pick up speed, but I wanted. I told her to let me go alone because for me it wasn’t so inclinated. She didn’t want to let me go but I ignore her and I released her.
I started to feel nervous because I was very fast and I couldn’t find any place to stop. The first thing that I saw in that moment was the bus stop. I crash with the glass and I broke it. My mum, my friend, her mother, and some people who saw me started to run. I felt as if I had woken up from a dream. My mum became very nervous. I had some small cuts, and I hurt my hands, but fortunately nothing happened to me.
Lucía del Rocío García Marín 4ºC
ResponderEliminarThe main character is a boy called Andres. Andres walked home distracted, like every night, after finishing football training. He was tall, thin, dark and elegant, he could not imagine how he would change his night in a few moments.
Suddenly, a car cuts her way, and without saying a word a young woman pushes him inside the car. The vehicle picks up speed along the avenue and with only the dark witness night.
He tries to escape from the situation but they tie his hands, cover his eyes with a scarf and spend a few minutes without knowing where they were taking him
Suddenly, the car stopped and Andres began to hear a familiar melody. It was his favorite song for years. He listen some laughs too. They removed the scarf of the eyes of Andres and, before giving him time to react, he finds himself before an unexpected audience; family members, friends singing the"Happy Birthday...!" song. Everyone came to congratulate him. They spent a very special night and he could never forget that birthday so special.
`The girl in the window´
ResponderEliminarThis story has three important characters, but the main one is Jessie, an 18 year old girl, tall and blonde. Jordi is also the boy he meets and his father Marc.
Jessie had an illness, her illness was that she could not give him the light of day, if she gave him the light she could end up dying. Jessie likes to play the guitar and sing. She lived with her father in front of the beach, her mother had died and she, as a child before she had that illness, went to the beach with her mother every day with the guitar and she started singing.
Jessie put herself every day in the window of her room to sing with the guitar. Ever since I was a little girl I had seen every summer day a boy who was passing by his house with his surfboard.
At night, Jessei would sing with his guitar at the train stop. One day she saw the boy who had seen him get off the train since childhood, the boy caught his attention because he sang very well and went to talk to her, she was very nervous because she liked it a lot. The boy's name was Jordi, she did not tell him his name, and she had never seen him. She lied to him, told him that she did not know him, but the truth is that she had seen him grow up. She was so nervous that she ran away and left her diary where she wrote down all the lyrics of her songs. Jordi picked it up and picked it up and started to read it, of suddenly Jessie realized that she had not picked up her agenda and returned to take her to the train. Jordi was there waiting for her with the schedule. Then Jessei already told him his name and they started talking. From that day they began to stay every day. Jessie did not tell him her illness, and she always made an excuse to stay at night.
One night they were left to the beach and they fell asleep, it started to dawn, Jessie got up because the sun hit her, then she ran away to her house, Jordi did not know what was happening to her. When Jessie came to her house she told her father Marc. Jordi ran to her house and found out everything. They went to the hospital and told him that nothing had affected him but that if he returned to the sun he could die. Jessie had a dream that was to take a boat ride on the beach. After what happened Jessie told her father that she could not take it any more than she wanted to go out to the beach during the day and take a boat trip with Jordi. His father Marc told him to do whatever he wants if that was his dream. Jordi sold him his eyes and took him to the beach and gave him the surprise that it was to take a boat ride with him. Jessie enjoyed more than any day of her life. Finally, the next day passed away.
LOLA PALLARES RODRIGUEZ 4ºC
ResponderEliminarBLOG TASK: a story .
SPRING:
the queen flora was the prettiest and kindest fairy in the whole garden, the queen flora had a very beautiful hair a very perfect skin a green eyes hope and a great smile. She was wearing a dress of rose petals and her wings were the most envied of the garden because they were the largest and the most transparent.
On the other hand we have Elupi, who was one of the craziest fairies in the garden. Elupi had dark hair with many curls and eyes as blue as crystal clear water. He had a dark skin and his wings were golden with silver details.
There was a time when the clouds turned white, in the sky it was beginning to look intense and in the forest it seemed that the rainbow had suddenly dropped its colors. And the fairies and elves flitted happily in fields and meadows!
then, the flora queen said, with her serene voice:
- I know you are wanting to fly among the flowers and do tricks in the air. but, be careful with the water! streams, rivers and lakes can be dangerous, do not get too close to them!
and in that instant, thin drops of rain began to fall. Elupi raised his hands to feel the rain better. and after a while he said: why do flowers always need water?
-They need it not to dry
the flora queen answered him.
-without her most plants could not survive
Elupi left thinking about the flowers and decided to stay in the rain without moving just as if it were a flower
but after a while she realized that the rain had soaked her wings and seeing her like that, Sarpeli, her sister was very scared.
Elupi, wait! do not move I'm going to get help! shouted him. and then he said that the pollen from the flowers would be perfect to dry the wings.
He went looking for his friends and told them what happened to Elupi. Well, let's go for pollen! answered nirsin.
and so they picked up a lot of pollen and threw it to Elupi on the wings very carefully.all right! Elupi exclaimed when he saw that his wings were as good as new. thank you very much everyone, I have gone through a terrible fear, I do not know what would be of me without my wings without being able to fly among the flowers and reach the highest branches of the magic tree and I would surely lose myself the forest. then they all came to hug her even though she had been very imprudent, the effort of her friends had saved her.
Upon learning of what happened, in the flora queen said:
-I hope you all learned the lesson, sometimes the most unexpected things can hurt us. and now to celebrate that Elupi is fine, you can go to flutter!
then the fairies and the goblins flew under the warm sun of spring, together and happy with their beautiful wings furrowing the wind.